As Long As Forever Lasts

If you listen to my heart
you might feel what I feel
if you hear what I say
you would never walk away
do you hear when I tell you
to please be my friend forever
Even though we might be far apart
could you still be there
when I need someone the most
After all we shared 
would you be there
even if we didn't last
We can still be friends
until the world ends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 1, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Hi Margaret, your heartfelt sentiments are very touching. Love your honesty here for it always makes for good poetry. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, smile. Happy New Year! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
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January 1, 2010 at 2:54 PM
such longing felt in this poem
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January 1, 2010 at 1:28 PM
i know this feeling... all too well. good write ------Ell
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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