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As Long As Forever Lasts

If you listen to my heart you might feel what I feel if you hear what I say you would never walk away do you hear when I tell you to please be my friend forever Even though we might be far apart could you still be there when I need someone the most After all we shared would you be there even if we didn't last We can still be friends until the world ends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/1/2010 6:06:00 PM
Hi Margaret, your heartfelt sentiments are very touching. Love your honesty here for it always makes for good poetry. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, smile. Happy New Year! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/1/2010 2:54:00 PM
such longing felt in this poem
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Date: 1/1/2010 1:28:00 PM
i know this feeling... all too well. good write ------Ell
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Date: 1/1/2010 1:04:00 PM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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