Unseeking Seeker Poet Enclosed Rhyme

As life unfolds

witnessing life flow unfold
to retain heart’s glow
it helps not to know
our fate foretold

what counts is this 
soul’s vibrancy innate
letting not fear forms bait
presence suffused with bliss

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Gershon Wolf December 1, 2023 at 1:12 PM 'Fate' or 'Destiny' is for the One Above to know and for us to be to become. Well-put, my friend. ~ Gershon Unseeking Seeker December 1, 2023 at 6:31 PM Thank you, gw. Wise words

Clive Culverhouse November 30, 2023 at 2:36 AM This is great, I'm very interested in how fate works and foreknowledge, but you're right it's best not to know although I would like to know the mechanics of how it is known, if that makes sense. Very thought provoking poem Unseeking Seeker November 30, 2023 at 11:06 AM Life is already impulsed as of soul agreement ~ that’s my view