As Is

~ how liberating - our present circumstances accepted, as is~ Date written: 06/12/2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2023 12:42:00 PM

Yes, how liberating indeed!!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2023 4:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea:-)

Lin Lane

Date: 6/13/2023 7:14:00 AM

Not having to live up to someone else's expectations of us is liberating. We should focus on what we expect of ourselves. Terrific Monoku, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2023 7:25:00 AM

Thank you very much, Lin:-)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/13/2023 4:45:00 AM

hmmm to be freed because we accept what is, just the way it is..... yes I guess if our current state is acceptable, as it is, then we do feel freedom. Definitely a thought to ponder. I think there is a "but what if" in there somewhere. I like the way you write.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2023 5:13:00 AM

Yes, agreed, SV:-) Appreciate the visit and comments, my friend.