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As If Waiting

a pallid pool leaves and flotsam lethargic, desiccated as if waiting for a giant spoon to stir them what if it all freezes

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Date: 11/26/2019 1:21:00 AM

Striking image, memorably described. Nice one,Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/26/2019 2:33:00 PM

Thank you for your generous assessment of these images, Geoffrey! Best wishes, Gershon

Date: 11/26/2019 12:06:00 AM

Lol I'm with Richard my mind is stired!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/26/2019 2:32:00 PM

What can I say? A stirred mind is --- a stirred mind, I guess. :)

Date: 11/25/2019 11:13:00 PM

Gershon, Well now that would be something stirring. This poem stirs the mind so well. -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/26/2019 2:31:00 PM

Just make sure not to stir with a plastic straw...And extra sure not to throw it in the ocean!!!!!

Date: 11/25/2019 10:05:00 PM

Crikey, stirring imagery. Excellent piece my friend! xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/26/2019 2:30:00 PM

I'll have to ladle out some more liqiud imagery soon. lol. Thanks, Maureen! :) gw

Date: 11/25/2019 5:01:00 PM

Hello Gershon Wolf, yes that is a sad state for water to to be.Have a nice evening my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2019 5:29:00 PM

It is sad; so true. Thanks, Darlene! :) gw