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As If They Had Souls

The rocks rose above The salty steam of their death As if they had souls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2014 4:16:00 PM
beautiful beginning Haiku and end, Mike. My compliments.
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:24:00 AM
Mike... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:54:00 AM
Excellent take- Congrats Mike
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Date: 3/25/2010 10:18:00 AM
Interesting Haiku...Keep the creative pen flowing. If for Raul's contest good luck..It is a winner...Sara
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Date: 3/10/2010 2:23:00 PM
wow i like this i dont know if you won or not but you should have this is a unique way of describing the ghost tides and i thought it was wonderful! Jo
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:45:00 PM
Hey, I thought I had seen all the winners already. I guess I missed this one Congratulations, Mike, Good one!
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Date: 2/26/2010 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations and kudos! Mike, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:10:00 AM
Hey Mike, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ghost Tides Contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/23/2010 4:47:00 PM
Congrats Mike on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful victory for an amazing write.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/23/2010 2:35:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 2/23/2010 1:35:00 PM
Mike, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 2/23/2010 10:39:00 AM
Deep and liked this Haiku, strong feeling portrayed, thanks for your support Daniel
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:15:00 PM
very vivid poem, enjoyed
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Date: 2/22/2010 2:16:00 PM
mysterious paradox
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Date: 2/22/2010 1:46:00 PM
Very thought provoking! Light & Love
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