Home » Poems » Mike Butler » As If They Had Souls

As If They Had Souls

The rocks rose above 
The salty steam of their death
As if they had souls.

naturehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ralph Sergi

April 27, 2014 at 4:16 PM

beautiful beginning Haiku and end, Mike. My compliments.

Poet Destroyer A

April 27, 2014 at 2:24 AM

Mike... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Mitch White

April 1, 2010 at 2:54 AM

Excellent take- Congrats Mike

Sara Kendrick

March 25, 2010 at 10:18 AM

Interesting Haiku...Keep the creative pen flowing. If for Raul's contest good luck..It is a winner...Sara

Joanna Smith

March 10, 2010 at 2:23 PM

wow i like this i dont know if you won or not but you should have this is a unique way of describing the ghost tides and i thought it was wonderful! Jo

Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2010 at 9:45 PM

Hey, I thought I had seen all the winners already. I guess I missed this one Congratulations, Mike, Good one!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 26, 2010 at 4:57 PM

Congratulations and kudos! Mike, you are in the winners’ circle with your haiku entry in Ghost Tides Sponsored by: Raul Moreno. Keep those creative words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann