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As I Weigh

As I weigh the love from the pain....?? I end up with the same thought again and again...?? The love was good when it started....?? we chilled with friends, each other we never parted....?? You held me close with an embrace so tight...?? It kept love thoughts on my mind all day some nights....?? ......One day I awoke and it all seemed different...?? It felt like being stripped of your virginity, and all along its been missing....?? We went from hanging to namin all the people you could do...?? The hold I felt was me holding myself after you....?? As I lay I weigh the thoughts of our love from our pain.....?? The names the claims to each and every game you played....?? Balances......??                    Lean to a love you should share with another ?? Goodbye, Brother...??                            BYE......

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Date: 12/28/2008 8:46:00 PM
Great. I'm sure many people can relate to this poem. And it really is so well done with great imagery.Also thanks for your warm comments on my poem.....Matt
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