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As I Watch Waves Crash

I walk bare feet along the beach, The waves come rushing to greet me, They play hide and seek with my feet, And challenge me to enjoy my best. The constant music they play, Serenades my lover to ecstasy, Dancing to the music of the waves, Unifies our heart and souls. The time never waits, The tide hardly can wait, The sand sculpture of my beloved waits, Hoping they would momentarily wait, and feel the deep love embedded in it. Sometimes the waves may seem to be beating in vain, they can't even make up their mind and hold on to the beach, Even this seems like a victory in defeat, Trying to succeed is more challenging than the victory itself.

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Date: 10/10/2023 12:49:00 PM
very creative one, Jay. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/10/2023 11:20:00 AM
Hello Jay Naravain, is a beautiful sound to me. I could listen to it for hours. It is music to my ears. enjoy your dsy my friend. \Darlene\
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