As I Watch the Waves Crash

As I watch the waves crash
It reminds me of life's
Ups and downs
On a good day
Life's great, fantastic
On a bad day
You can feel the crash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 1:45 PM
Love the comparison between life and the sea. Blessings
Meadows Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 12:41 PM
A good description. Well done.
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