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As I watch the waves crash .Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

As I watch the waves crash against the rocks and sand, and fondled my bare feet; My mind wonders with the refracting color of the mist. Cleansing the air reigning in azure buttermilk sky. A playground of sea gulls against the sonorous breathing waves. Purge memories come, yearning thirst of your love to have once more. To trace your face to my sea of memories of where our life began A sweet surrender in your arms with you forever. To capture your heart in serene rapture, and run. Upon the rainbow and feel the wind blow against our form. To love you like there is not another morrow in my soul. Even in heaven, a new life with God’s blessings.

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Date: 10/17/2023 1:42:00 AM
This is a very deep and heartfelt write, infused with many emotions.. Ah, I can really feel the vulnerability and ache of wandering in a loved one's absence where nostalgic reminiscences crash the shorelines of our hearts and we are embalmed in immortal memories.. Your imagery is so beautiful here.. "refracting color of the mist", "azure buttermilk sky", "Even in heaven, a new life with God’s blessings" That ending is really profound.. A very evocative write..
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Date: 10/15/2023 10:02:00 PM
“Even in heaven, a new life with God’s blessings.” That line::. Sigh made me feel so much. I absolutely felt the longing and so many emotions as well as the descriptive way youv written this is beyond impressive. Impeccable flow of words i love the opening too. Soulfully divine
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Date: 10/14/2023 6:29:00 AM
Love is interwoven with intricate detailed and creative words of waves folding and churning finally coming to splash gently around your feet, my heart really feels for you my friend. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/14/2023 2:10:00 AM
Can we ever forget our first encounter? Famous song: Memories are made of this. Hugs and blessings.
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Date: 10/13/2023 11:18:00 PM
A beautiful and heartfelt poem. I feel the sea in the words
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Date: 10/13/2023 3:18:00 PM
aww Eve i know how much you miss your beloved Sonny, this is such a lovely tribute. i used to have such fun writing limericks with him. hugs jan x
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Date: 10/13/2023 2:39:00 PM
wow Eve, you have mellowed my heart with this emotional poem of beauty. I bet Roper is so so proud, :)
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Date: 10/13/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thoughts about him? I'm sure you are eager to reunite. Love the buttermilk sky reference
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