Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

As I Watch the Waves Crash

I feel so small and so insignificant
Waves so tall like white wall magnificent
Smelling new blue rain coming fast
Feeling pink pain in my bones so bad

Memories of the two of us 
At the beach so new in love
As I watch the waves dart and dash
I should have known we would not last

Reveries of present seagull day
Ride the stream across the wave
New love is on the way, sweet like wedding cake
I believe in true love today.

I watch waves crash as life twist and turns
We pour ashes from a solid gold urn
Loving life and dealing with death’s burn
Waves teach us faith and why we must learn.

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Gershon Wolf October 12, 2023 at 7:25 PM The waves crash, but instead of burning too, they inspire! Wonder and Awe, Gershon Karen Jones October 12, 2023 at 10:08 PM Hugs Gershon isn't God's work inspiring and amazing?

Deb M October 9, 2023 at 11:35 AM An Amazing poem Karen….l felt l was there! I love the ocean when its wild and furious….Debx Karen Jones October 9, 2023 at 12:44 PM I agree. The vastness of the ocean is mesmerizing. I appreciate your kind comments Deb!

Janice Canerdy October 9, 2023 at 5:42 AM Karen, your poem vividly expresses the emotions evoked by observation of the ocean's waves. Janice Karen Jones October 9, 2023 at 5:50 AM Thanks for reading Janice!

Suzanne Delaney October 8, 2023 at 5:08 PM I really enjoyed your imagery a of waves and life’s twists and turns. Thanks for visiting my poem today. Hugs, SuZ Karen Jones October 8, 2023 at 5:11 PM My pleasure Suzanne and thanks for your visit and comment.