As I Was Walking In the Snow

AS I WAS WALKING IN THE SNOW

As I was walking in the snow of prints,
blanket mystery of Denali squints.
        Where’d I put my maps?
        Polar bear, perhaps?
A roaring of fur — I race from sure hints!

2/16/2018
Contest Limerick sponsored by Kevin Shaw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 17, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Hi Kim, This is a good take on the contest theme. Beware of those polar bears! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Thank you, Alexis! :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 4:48 PM
I love the imagery, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Thanks, Line!
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 1:44 PM
- Watch out for polar bears, Kim ... not like a nice teddy bear :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 4:56 PM
LOL! Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Cunningham Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 9:07 AM
I hope you outran him Kim ! Good luck in the contest. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 5:00 PM
LOL! Thanks, Tom!
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