As I Was Walking In the Snow

As I was making my way through the snow
In hand a hot Starbucks Macchiato
T’was such a cold frosty day
Barely could babble Hey!
I've paid too much for this Gazpacho



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 10:08 PM
Macchiato! Gazpacho! Excellente! --gw
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 10:14 PM
Thank you for your visit, Gershon. LOL
Adams Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Good one Line. I may be a slight bit influenced by a love of anything coffee flavored but I love the rhyme and Starbucks is worth it!!......Nice write.. pat
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Pat. Much appreciated.
Y. Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Lol! Line, I really enjoyed this fun piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Thank you, Alexis. Most appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:52 AM
A fun one Line. Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, Richard. Much appreciated.
One Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 6:30 AM
Ha! Great limerick.
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so much, SO.
Tripp Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 11:35 PM
Lol...an overpriced Starbucks? Noooo. Great limerick and a catchy write. Very well done.
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rhoda. LOL
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 9:46 PM
You made me smile with Starbucks Macchiato! Nice!
Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim.
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