As I Recall

As I recall
I sat here with you once
on this old log in the woods
and sealed our love
by carving our names on this log
many moons ago
The log has aged and so have I
But the memory of you
still lingers

It lingers on the ideal times 
we spent together
building our dreams
one dollar at a time
with money left for love
and wine
then fortune shone upon us
things got better and we created 
a pompous air
then things got bitter and I
did'nt care
what really mattered most 
in our life

As I recall
we wasted words in anger
and left a void so many times
that took so long to fill
then you were ill
your health had waned
I did'nt believe
but I asked your God
for a chance to change
to redeem myself before its too late
what really mattered most 
in our life

in order to rebuild my soul
to  be the man you knew as kind
to please make you better 
one more time

My wish was short lived
but I cherished each moment
while you were there
you left me a gift
and asked me to rediscover
where we both began

As I recall it was this spot where
on this log our names still  show
my name has faded but yours is visible
for I dug yours deeper
and now I know, dearest
oh, yes now I know 

© Ralph  L. Sergi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 28, 2015 at 10:46 PM
Ralph, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Sergi Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Thank you for your comment, Skat A.
Onclaud Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:13 AM
deeply touched by this warm piece, serge.. big congrats!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:01 AM
:) KUDOS.. :) SUPERB WRITE.. :)
Kayode Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Truly romantic,congrats Ralph...huggs
Sergi Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Hi KAYOD: Thank you. i ENJOYED WRITING IT.
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Hi Ralph! This is lovely, romantic, touching, and sad. Sent vibes to my heart. Congratulations on a very merited win. #7 All the best. // paul
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Dropping back to say Many congrats on your win Ralph:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Wow, Ralph this write is so touching. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
Lawless Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Congrats on the win Ralph.
Sergi Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Thank you, John, nice to know you. I also enjoyed your Coyote poem. very descriptive with a sense of foreboding.
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 4:28 AM
Congrats on the very win, a great write, Ralph
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 6:32 PM
I seem to have been drawn back to this one again, yep it's still great!
Sergi Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Merci, Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 6:55 PM
This is so touching and romantic. I hope this is from imagination and not a real loss you have experienced, if so I offer my condolances.
Sergi Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Thank you, Richard: It is from my imagination.Have a Happy New Year, Amigo.
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 5:14 AM
Lovely romantic expressions, Ralph, Merry Christmas
Sergi Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram and I also wish you Happy Holidays!
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Such a beautiful and romantic pen Ralph! I truly enjoyed your piece dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you and your family a very Merry Christmas! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Sergi Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Dorian God Bless and havea happy holiday.
Allison Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 6:23 PM
such a tender romantic write Ralph love the imagery and especially the sentiment in the final stanza:-) hugs jan - its a 7 from me:-)
Sergi Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Thank you, Jan and have a happy holiday.
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