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As I Melt With Her

Crawling my fingers through her silk-like hair I softly touch the rims of her ears with my palms I drop my elbows and slowly caress her cheeks I then, lower my hands and tenderly cup her fruit So to warm her blood With her eyes lightly shut...grasping hold her waist, I pull her in...close to me My eyes wide open...as I watch her melt At that split second, right before our lips collide I close my eyes And we melt...together Kissing Poetry Contest Sponsor: Bobby May 12-12-2019 *Placed 2nd

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Date: 1/1/2020 8:00:00 PM
Whew, this is a hot one, Charlie. Congrats on your win in the contest! Happy 2020, Gershon
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Date: 12/28/2019 8:24:00 AM
Back with congrats on your deserved win Charles. A Happy and healthy 2020 to you and yours. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/26/2019 2:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/25/2019 1:35:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Charlie :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/24/2019 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/24/2019 6:05:00 PM
wow, Charles . this is superb. A FAVE!
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Date: 12/24/2019 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/24/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bobby. I really appreciate your generous placement. Happy Holidays.. Charlie
Date: 12/16/2019 8:37:00 PM
wow...sensual write Charlie.. wonderfully penned...best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Date: 12/15/2019 11:03:00 PM
Hi Charles, a very passionate write - good luck in the contest my friend and Christmas blessings to you and your family. Jennifer.
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Date: 12/13/2019 6:32:00 PM
Hello Charles … very romantic indeed - thank you Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 12/13/2019 7:01:00 AM
How sweet--charming poetry Charles.
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:13:00 PM
ooh, I feel weak! good one!! :)
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Date: 12/12/2019 10:29:00 PM
Hey, Charlie: How about putting out an instructional video on this, so we can all SEE what you're talking about. Visuals, man! Like, you know... LOL. Enjoyed this, and g.l. n the contest. Merry merriment! :) gw
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Date: 12/12/2019 9:50:00 PM
You kisser, you! ))) Goid Poem. Read my Lavendar Massage Oil, Lavender sheets. ))) Not for a Contesst Besa me mucho, Panagiota
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