As I Melt With Her

Crawling my fingers through her silk-like hair
I softly touch the rims of her ears with my palms
 
I drop my elbows and slowly caress her cheeks
 
I then, lower my hands and tenderly cup her fruit
So to warm her blood
 
With her eyes lightly shut...grasping hold her waist,
I pull her in...close to me
 
My eyes wide open...as I watch her melt
  
At that split second, right before our lips collide 
I close my eyes

And we melt...together 


Kissing Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Bobby May 
12-12-2019 

*Placed 2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Whew, this is a hot one, Charlie. Congrats on your win in the contest! Happy 2020, Gershon
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December 28, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Back with congrats on your deserved win Charles. A Happy and healthy 2020 to you and yours. Blessings, Jennifer.
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December 26, 2019 at 2:37 AM
Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve
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December 25, 2019 at 1:35 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Charlie :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)
Chiri Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 6:05 PM
wow, Charles . this is superb. A FAVE!
May Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 2:45 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
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December 24, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Thank you so much, Bobby. I really appreciate your generous placement. Happy Holidays.. Charlie
Adams Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 8:37 PM
wow...sensual write Charlie.. wonderfully penned...best wishes in the contest... hugs
Proxenos Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Hi Charles, a very passionate write - good luck in the contest my friend and Christmas blessings to you and your family. Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Hello Charles … very romantic indeed - thank you Charles - Lindsay
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 7:01 AM
How sweet--charming poetry Charles.
Woodrow Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 11:13 PM
ooh, I feel weak! good one!! :)
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Hey, Charlie: How about putting out an instructional video on this, so we can all SEE what you're talking about. Visuals, man! Like, you know... LOL. Enjoyed this, and g.l. n the contest. Merry merriment! :) gw
Romios Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 9:50 PM
You kisser, you! ))) Goid Poem. Read my Lavendar Massage Oil, Lavender sheets. ))) Not for a Contesst Besa me mucho, Panagiota
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