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As I Leave the Salty Sands

After the oceans salty sands I dive into the deep blue T shirt, and let it flow over me Jump into my shorts Wade into my shoes and leave the shore For dry land 20161023

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Date: 10/24/2016 2:20:00 PM
Eric, I enjoyed this poem it made me feel like I were on the beach. That was a nice feeling. I enjoyed this poem.
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