Chris Green Poet Free verse

As I Kissed You - Compact Poem

The twilight sky blushed

as the sunset
kissed the horizon

While the 
universe blushed

as I kissed you



This form is what I call a Compact Poem, in case you were wondering. :)

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Maria Williams May 27, 2017 at 8:56 PM Maybe compact in form, but descriptive words make it simply huge on meaning. ....Maria7+ Chris Green May 29, 2017 at 9:20 AM Thank you again and again my friend.

Darren White May 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM I already knew it was a compact ;p This one belongs to the compact ripples and shore one for me, as lovely and beautiful. It colours the sky, my heart and all of the world. Chris Green May 25, 2017 at 8:20 AM Thanks so much my friend. I was hoping you would like it.

Sara Ella May 24, 2017 at 11:22 PM This poem is compact on words but huge on wonderful! Chris Green May 25, 2017 at 8:19 AM Aw, thanks so much Sara. I appreciate your kindness.

Lenna Walker May 24, 2017 at 10:30 PM It may be compact but it is sweet and creative, I like the double blushing reference :) Chris Green May 25, 2017 at 8:19 AM Thanks so very much Lenna. I wrote a series of these little poems, they were fun to write. I am so happy you liked this one. I always look forward to your visits.

Charmaine Chircop May 24, 2017 at 8:54 PM Oh I can visualize the compact scene of the lips...and all the blushing - Very Sweet :) Chris Green May 25, 2017 at 8:18 AM Thank you Charmaine for the wonderful comments I always find after you have visited my poetry. I always smile when you stop by to read.

Jan Allison May 24, 2017 at 6:12 PM lovely personification and I love the romantic turn at the end:-) hugs jan xx Chris Green May 25, 2017 at 8:17 AM Thanks so much my friend.

Tim Smith May 24, 2017 at 2:55 PM enchanting (compact comment) Darren White May 25, 2017 at 12:01 AM say: "yw" Tim, compactier isn't possible :) Chris Green May 24, 2017 at 3:11 PM Thx (compactier reply) :)

Heidi Sands May 24, 2017 at 2:50 PM A sweet compact poem filled with kisses :) Chris Green May 24, 2017 at 2:53 PM Thank you so much my sweet friend. :)