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As I hid

As I hid behind the darkness of Spring's cool night there she stood dreaming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2016 11:11:00 AM
So much in one line; very good.
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:49:00 AM
Lovely poem and perfect example of the form.
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:53:00 PM
James, this is beautiful. :) LINDA
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:13:00 PM
James, beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:22:00 AM
This is a jewel you got here James, glad I came across it.. oh yeah I dropped you soupmail as well :) love Wilma
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:11:00 AM
REviewing my fav poems today and saw this gem again! Hi there. have a great weekend!!
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Date: 7/2/2010 4:47:00 PM
This is an excellent piece. I hope it's not a Goddess you're observing. This would be much worse than the muzzle of a Winchester. Hahahahah! You go dude! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:56:00 PM
well wow is right! this makes ones imagination soar! well done indeed. James, thank you so much for all those wonderful comments you thoughtful, kind man. what a delightful treat and I assure you it is more appreciated than I can express. thank you thank you!!! : )) xoxo
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Date: 5/15/2010 6:27:00 AM
Simply beautiful!
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:56:00 PM
Thankxxx for your many wonderful and uplifting comments today James.. u have inspired and I too am an impatient lady .. but the contests are quite addictive and so I feel the need to create to enter them.. challenging myself I guess... luv to u and Noah... from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:11:00 PM
been on both sides of this lens....well penned! JP!
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:17:00 PM
Great short write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:41:00 PM
This is really awesome, JAmes!! A fav!
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Date: 5/11/2010 6:29:00 AM
beautiful monoku James. Charma
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Date: 5/10/2010 6:11:00 PM
I enjoyed the images
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Date: 5/10/2010 5:43:00 PM
Oh, I can picture it..nice one. BG
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Date: 5/10/2010 5:03:00 PM
love it! JP!!!! ROCK-ON! BROTHER!!! jimbo
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:19:00 PM
The image of this girl comes through so clearly, James. Keep watching out for her! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2010 4:12:00 PM
nice one
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Date: 5/10/2010 3:52:00 PM
very nice ~ a treat for the imagination ! Nice dream~you've got me thinking of her~Thanks~Rick
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