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As I Hid

As I hid behind the darkness of Spring's cool night there she stood dreaming

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James Inman

Date: 9/29/2022 6:00:00 PM

Re-reading some of my fav'd poems. This one takes me to so many places.

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/19/2016 11:11:00 AM

So much in one line; very good.

Lycia Harding

Date: 1/7/2016 1:49:00 AM

Lovely poem and perfect example of the form.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2016 10:53:00 PM

James, this is beautiful. :) LINDA

James Inman

Date: 8/17/2015 9:13:00 PM

James, beautiful poem.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/2/2010 6:22:00 AM

This is a jewel you got here James, glad I came across it.. oh yeah I dropped you soupmail as well :) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2010 8:11:00 AM

REviewing my fav poems today and saw this gem again! Hi there. have a great weekend!!

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/2/2010 4:47:00 PM

This is an excellent piece. I hope it's not a Goddess you're observing. This would be much worse than the muzzle of a Winchester. Hahahahah! You go dude! Great job! Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/2/2010 4:56:00 PM

well wow is right! this makes ones imagination soar! well done indeed. James, thank you so much for all those wonderful comments you thoughtful, kind man. what a delightful treat and I assure you it is more appreciated than I can express. thank you thank you!!! : )) xoxo