As I Hid

Re-reading some of my fav'd poems. This one takes me to so many places.

So much in one line; very good.

Lovely poem and perfect example of the form.

James, this is beautiful. :) LINDA

James, beautiful poem.

This is a jewel you got here James, glad I came across it.. oh yeah I dropped you soupmail as well :) love Wilma

REviewing my fav poems today and saw this gem again! Hi there. have a great weekend!!

This is an excellent piece. I hope it's not a Goddess you're observing. This would be much worse than the muzzle of a Winchester. Hahahahah! You go dude! Great job! Joseph

well wow is right! this makes ones imagination soar! well done indeed. James, thank you so much for all those wonderful comments you thoughtful, kind man. what a delightful treat and I assure you it is more appreciated than I can express. thank you thank you!!! : )) xoxo

Simply beautiful!

been on both sides of this lens....well penned! JP!

Great short write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

This is really awesome, JAmes!! A fav!

beautiful monoku James. Charma

I enjoyed the images

Oh, I can picture it..nice one. BG

love it! JP!!!! ROCK-ON! BROTHER!!! jimbo

The image of this girl comes through so clearly, James. Keep watching out for her! Love, Carolyn

nice one