Robert Lindley Poet Rhyme

As I Gazed Awestruck, Thankful For Such Lush Bounty

As I Gazed Awestruck, Thankful For Such Lush Bounty

    When you directed flames- my lust anticipated
    your red-lips brushed my cheek- I knew it was Fated.
    Will you seek those lover's days again as oft do I,
    you in mini-skirt, high black boots and gleaming eyes?

    There was gentleness in your soft kiss and wet lips,
    why we never slept on our overnight camping trips?
    Your sexy body, loaded with heat and welcoming thighs
    my mind so inflamed and your soft moaning cries!

    Dawn's new lights, you uncovered in naked beauty
    as I gazed awestruck, thankful for such lush bounty.
    Now we gaze into lost paradise, again we lust
    for fires unquenchable, once again, that loving trust.

    Say, tell me, you watch for words to again meet
    for love, my future vow to again lay roses at your feet!
    For long nights of ecstasy and red-hot flames burning
    for love's hottest fires, rekindle our youthful yearnings!

September 23rd, 2017

    Composed for Gregory R Barden's
    "The Poet's Fire" Contest

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Paul Callus September 29, 2017 at 9:13 AM Undoubtedly a fitting passionate entry for this contest, Robert! Some memories will stay with us forever. Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven September 28, 2017 at 10:01 AM Hi Robert, now this is sensual in its entirity. Such an excellent write my friend. The lines are on fire. Desire, passion, what more does one need? I really hope this one does well in the contest. I didn't want this one to stop. Whatever you seem to write is beautiful and excellent. Has to be a fave. Your friend always....Mike.

Jan Allison September 27, 2017 at 3:15 PM wow what a passionate poem Robert it gives hot love a new meaning! love the imagery and your honesty in your comments I've read:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Robert Lindley September 27, 2017 at 4:26 PM Thank you my friend. There was much I had to leave out because of rules that forbid being too explicit. I had to edit several times because of that and have kept the original first full version in my journal for posterity. Nothing vulgar but had to make sure this was allowed.

Lynn Marie September 26, 2017 at 4:32 PM Lush and luscious indeed Robert:) A most sultry piece conveying pure wanton desire at its finest. Passion is glorious under your skillful pen. Excellent writing. Robert Lindley September 27, 2017 at 4:25 PM Thank you my friend. There was much I had to leave out because of rules that forbid being too explicit. I had to edit several times because of that and have kept the original first full version in my journal for posterity. Nothing vulgar but had to make sure this was allowed.

Janis Medders Tobechi September 24, 2017 at 2:53 PM You have expressed the intensity of the desire very well. This is truly on fire. Good luck in the contest. Robert Lindley September 27, 2017 at 4:25 PM Thank you my friend. There was much I had to leave out because of rules that forbid being too explicit. I had to edit several times because of that and have kept the original first full version in my journal for posterity. Nothing vulgar but had to make sure this was allowed.

Carole Duet September 23, 2017 at 8:19 PM Beautiful, Robert! Only hot love could produce such a HOT poem. GL in the contest. Robert Lindley September 24, 2017 at 5:28 AM Thank you my friend. Yes, this was written based upon one of my life experiences as a wild young mustang. I being young and foolish let lot of people down with my search for every great adventures in life. Yet time and wisdom finally gained --healed me and now I am tremendously blessed.

Susan Ashley September 23, 2017 at 7:25 PM Robert, such a romantic wondrous write! I love all the endearing, lustful, sensual, beautiful lines in your write, but I especially love; 'why we never slept on our overnight camping trips', a very sexual and passionate image, though the imagery is fantastic throughout! Well done my friend. Good luck in the contest! :) Robert Lindley September 24, 2017 at 5:24 AM I think we my have scared a few bears away with our-- not sleeping hours ! She was a dream , a most wonderful and full of life lady. One far, far too good for me, at that time, in my wild, wild young life.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 23, 2017 at 5:06 PM Robert! Lush indeed! Your rich pen doth deliver such a wonderful intimate portrait of a lifetime of love. And passion! Wonderful..."never sleeping on camping trips" love it! xomo my best to you for the contest! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 24, 2017 at 8:16 AM Your strength of wisdom and character are well illustrated in your response Robert, you are noble. :)! Robert Lindley September 24, 2017 at 5:21 AM Thank you my friend. I can not forget such a beautiful lost gem. Such heat and passion, her gift to me was greater than gold. A shame that I was not worthy at that time in my life.. I did however, leave to make sure that I did not destroy hers.