Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Free verse

As I Drown

As I drown




Struggling masculine waves
trapped amidst whirlpool,
Tides cuddled my soul
as ocean of fears rolled.

Enormous vast sea
beyond farthest sights,
Engulfed our titanic
such worst plight.

Profound last supper
eternal love dance,
Loud notes of music
broken strings, tranquil.

Rescue sounds in air
as if a chopper,
Then the harsh alarm
and I find myself awake!





Written August 1st, 2015
For contest " poem with a chilling twist" by Frank Herrara

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David Fisher August 3, 2015 at 8:26 PM Your title is so strong, and drew me in. Enjoyed your poem and looks like it will do well in the contest.

Shadow Hamilton August 2, 2015 at 11:07 PM great pen Dr Upma gl in contest hugs 7

Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2015 at 11:24 AM - Wow ..... glad it was just a nightmare - Good luck in the contest, it will reach high Dr. Upma - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 2, 2015 at 11:56 AM Thnx dear Anne Lise!

Anu Nayak August 2, 2015 at 10:37 AM Dear Dr.Upma a beautiful poem....i enjoyed it a lot! Thanks for sha ring....ending is a happy one! Love, Anulaxmi:-) Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 2, 2015 at 10:58 AM Thnx for ur visit Anu! Yeah it's a happy one n not chilling!

Eve Roper August 2, 2015 at 10:10 AM fighting, alarming , and grateful it wasn't reality good write for the contest good luck Hugs Eve Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 2, 2015 at 10:28 AM Thnx for ur critical comments Eve! Will try editing or writing another one!