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As I Buggied About

Needed help walking Was in a superstore Sister spotted a buggie I looked and said. Noooooo But she insisted  Because of the pain Well, i did, guess what Will never do so again Just a front and reverse Oh i forgot, plus a horn She wrote out a big L Wishing i hadn't been born So started  it up Just missed some shopping Left on the floor Silly sod i said muttering Was going great guns Had many a smile From the old dears Pity showing a mile Some started to chat I laughed at their clout Had many a life story As i buggied about Would i do it again No blinking way Put up with  the pain On my feet I will stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/26/2013 4:14:00 PM
Well this as just got to be one of the best visual poems i've read in ages,, good one Seren,,, love this...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/26/2013 5:46:00 PM
Harry, lovely to see you, missed you. Lol it was an experience....Seren
Date: 5/25/2013 10:20:00 PM
Ha ha, this is quite the humorous little write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and funny poem this evening! You have inspired many with your poetry and I believe those that are looking for a hilarious write to be influenced by, this one would be a great one to do just that! What a terrific piece Seren, Fabulous Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/25/2013 10:24:00 PM
Yes Russell its funny now, guess it was funny the time really. But never again... Seren

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