As I Buggied About

Needed help walking
Was in a superstore
Sister spotted a buggie
I looked and said. Noooooo

But she insisted 
Because of the pain
Well, i did, guess what
Will never do so again

Just a front and reverse
Oh i forgot, plus a horn
She wrote out a big L
Wishing i hadn't been born

So started  it up
Just missed some shopping
Left on the floor
Silly sod i said muttering

Was going great guns
Had many a smile
From the old dears
Pity showing a mile

Some started to chat
I laughed at their clout
Had many a life story
As i buggied about

Would i do it again
No blinking way
Put up with  the pain
On my feet I will stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Well this as just got to be one of the best visual poems i've read in ages,, good one Seren,,, love this...
Roberts Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 5:46 PM
Harry, lovely to see you, missed you. Lol it was an experience....Seren
Sivey Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 10:20 PM
Ha ha, this is quite the humorous little write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and funny poem this evening! You have inspired many with your poetry and I believe those that are looking for a hilarious write to be influenced by, this one would be a great one to do just that! What a terrific piece Seren, Fabulous Work!!
Roberts Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Yes Russell its funny now, guess it was funny the time really. But never again... Seren
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