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As He Sleeps

I was a fool To believe that you loved me To fall for that cosmic joke As if I didn't know the punch line Now as I watch you sleep Your face has changed This moment gives birth To doubt and despair And I search your face To find a glimpse Of the source of my devotion But no sign of love remains Clarity offers revelation I am alone after all Oddly comforting, though The honesty of truth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 11:23:00 AM
Wow! Powerful, painfully thoughtful write! "I am alone after all Oddly comforting, though The honesty of truth" So wonderfully written! I hope this is purely fictional? But the sad words ring with truth and pain! I may only be 14, but I can taste the pain upon your lovely poem! Smile:) For this man may not desearve the liking of you and your amazing gift! Keep on trucking through life, you'll eventually get there with the help of some snow chains! May your writing be your helping chains! ~Cat
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:57:00 AM
this leaves me speachless, yet i know your pain, all i can do is close my eyes, and remember how i once cried in vain...always, Rain
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