As Eyelids Clode

and stars cover eyes moonlight tempos no surprise soft nebula tango January 15, 2020 English Haiku

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2020 1:21:00 PM

May the nebulas tango all night long! :) gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/16/2020 1:38:00 PM

Hi Getshon....I agree with you. Fab idea. Gee..cold in CA today....reminds me of Montrose and Lake Shore Drive. Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2020 1:07:00 PM

Hello Panagiota Romios, this would be the eye lid code. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2020 2:29:00 PM

Hello Panagiota,thank you panagiota. Havee a nice daymy friend.Darlene xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/16/2020 1:15:00 PM

Hi Darlene De Beaulieu! Appreciate your thoughts Panagiota xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/16/2020 12:23:00 PM

Hopefully a good night's sleep

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/16/2020 12:59:00 PM

There is nothing like a good night's rest... Soooooo refreshing.Tom. Thank you for the visit, Panagiota xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/16/2020 8:54:00 AM

A truly wonderful new haiku. I can see back in the past, a couple dancing under soft moonlight and very deep in the enchantment of a hot new romance. This one packs a lot in such few words! Bravo! Another fav....

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/16/2020 12:36:00 PM

You got it right, Robert. I will agree with you in your assessment! This is a lovely Haiku. Glad you saw the image I was attempting to create. Humbly, Panagiota xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/16/2020 12:38:00 AM

Ah, delicate, poetic and dancing.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/16/2020 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, Caren. I wish you a Dancing Day! Panagiota xx