As Eyelids Clode

and stars cover eyes
               moonlight tempos no surprise
               soft nebula tango

                   
                  
               January 15, 2020
            
                    English Haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 1:21 PM
May the nebulas tango all night long! :) gw
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Hi Getshon....I agree with you. Fab idea. Gee..cold in CA today....reminds me of Montrose and Lake Shore Drive. Panagiota xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 1:07 PM
Hello Panagiota Romios, this would be the eye lid code. Have a nice day my friend.
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January 17, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Hello Panagiota,thank you panagiota. Havee a nice daymy friend.Darlene xx
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Hi Darlene De Beaulieu! Appreciate your thoughts Panagiota xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 12:23 PM
Hopefully a good night's sleep
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 12:59 PM
There is nothing like a good night's rest... Soooooo refreshing.Tom. Thank you for the visit, Panagiota xx
Lindley Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 8:54 AM
A truly wonderful new haiku. I can see back in the past, a couple dancing under soft moonlight and very deep in the enchantment of a hot new romance. This one packs a lot in such few words! Bravo! Another fav....
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 12:36 PM
You got it right, Robert. I will agree with you in your assessment! This is a lovely Haiku. Glad you saw the image I was attempting to create. Humbly, Panagiota xx
Krutsinger Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 12:38 AM
Ah, delicate, poetic and dancing.
Romios Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, Caren. I wish you a Dancing Day! Panagiota xx
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