As Emerald Turns To Red

warm mellow breezes
of rippled buttery sun
churn buckets of spring
into chameleon leaves--
burning red, fore winter's kiss


August 1, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Lovely and colourful imagery, Sam...you paint with words! Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
Jameson Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 3:20 PM
A very kind compliment-- thank you, Paul.
Y. Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
Jameson Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Alexis-- very kind of you :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 5:43 PM
this is very imaginative. I am surprised it did not score super high. big congrats
Jameson Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Different strokes-- no worries. Thank you though, Andrea, for the kind feedback. Have a great night--
Raynes Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 11:59 PM
and autumn sets in , beautiful writing Sam
Jameson Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 9:58 AM
Thank you, Lewis-- I appreciate the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the read.
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