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As Dawn Breaks

quietly with love before sunrise
a moist kiss from mother earth
her offspring sent off to conquer the day



AP: 3rd place 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:01 PM
The web you've spun here is so alluring, Line! Magic and Motion, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:05 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon ~
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Ahhhhh so delicate; what empathy you have for baby spider!
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Ah ~ but only when it's outside the house
Kannan Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Such a great imagery... Poweful write, Line...
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so much, Supraja ~
Calasibetta Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 9:16 AM
Dear Line, what a beautiful poem presenting such a poignant picture of the wonder of nature. Take Care, Paulette
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Thank you very much, Paulette ~
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