As Dawn Breaks

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quietly with love before sunrise a moist kiss from mother earth her offspring sent off to conquer the day AP: 3rd place 2021 Posted on March 9, 2021

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Date: 3/11/2021 6:01:00 PM

The web you've spun here is so alluring, Line! Magic and Motion, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, Gershon ~

Date: 3/11/2021 1:41:00 PM

Ahhhhh so delicate; what empathy you have for baby spider!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:04:00 PM

Ah ~ but only when it's outside the house

Date: 3/11/2021 5:30:00 AM

Such a great imagery... Poweful write, Line...

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2021 6:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Supraja ~

Date: 3/10/2021 9:16:00 AM

Dear Line, what a beautiful poem presenting such a poignant picture of the wonder of nature. Take Care, Paulette

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2021 9:35:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paulette ~