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As Chubs Run

As Chubs Run Chubs run like marathon winners Laden with potato sacks Heavy legs, aching backs Rolls of fatty flapping Slap Slap slapping Huffing to get thinner ***Susan Burch*** *Won 7th place in "Anagrammatically Speaking" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2012 9:51:00 PM

Susan, Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/1/2012 11:44:00 AM

well done, a lovely read.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/29/2012 7:40:00 AM

Saw myself huffing and puffing...lol..congrats on being featured. BG

Daver Austin

Date: 2/28/2012 3:19:00 PM

Yeah! The fat city Olympics. LOve it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/27/2012 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol

Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/26/2012 11:38:00 PM

I'm glad this was featured. Undoubtedly I would have overlooked it, to my loss. While I can't say the word picture is pretty, it is pretty accurate. And that makes it a winner. - Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2011 10:42:00 PM

susan, kept looking around and just falling on poems I'd already seen.Anyway, I sure do like this one that I'd seen before. You are good with funny poems! YOur mail isn't in junk mail. I wonder why I couldn't get it. Sometimes it's the server people use. One time a friend could not get her mail to me.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2011 10:04:00 PM

I'm glad I found this funny little number! chubs is a cute name for them. Luv, Andrea

Matt Hunt

Date: 4/18/2011 8:47:00 PM

Very good and humorous. I liked it. Thank you so much for your review. God Bless. R.M.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2011 7:50:00 AM

LOL many congrats on your wins, Susan : ) Jack

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2011 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Susan in Nikko's "Anagram" contest. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2011 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/11/2011 3:42:00 PM

LOL Your poem reminds me of the TV show "The Biggest Loser," Susan. You should see how hard they work to get thinner! Congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest! Love, Carolyn