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As Autumn's Breeze

As cold autumn’s breeze starts flowing My heart treads on a mixed feeling I still haven’t worn all my summer dresses Haven’t had enough sun in my tresses But I love the bright hues of autumn leaves Change is lovely, it makes me believe The sidewalks have a yellow, orange coating Which stops kids from running or skating. Soon, Jack Frost will lower the temperature Making into snow all that hung as water I love to watch the pristine flakes falling Admire each crystal so unique in its making. It’s winter storms and blizzards that make me wary Driving to work in such conditions is always scary Written on:08/25/2016 Contest:As Autumn's Breeze

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Date: 8/27/2016 4:56:00 AM
A good take on autumn's breeze, well written x brilliant x
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Date: 8/25/2016 3:25:00 PM
a very nice presentation of fall, Sara. I am sure the judge is going to be very pleased with this one!
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