Timothy Hicks Poet Verse

As Above So Below

stories hung aloft
above us since time immemorial
connecting the dots...

...beauty in variety
before Adam named the animals
God named stars



PS. This LUNE form is kind of interesting...

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis April 29, 2021 at 7:38 PM "God named stars." Thank you for sharing this eye opening short short, thought provoking. I am in awe of stars and believe there's so much more to stars than we'll ever know.

Line Gauthier April 14, 2021 at 7:31 AM Delightful, Timothy ~ Timothy Hicks April 15, 2021 at 6:54 AM Thanks Line!

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2021 at 4:43 PM I am very surprised I never saw this before. I LOVE this short form. Great poem and message. Timothy Hicks April 7, 2021 at 10:25 PM Thanks Andrea! It's quite incredible the sheer number of poetry forms out there!

Juliet Ligon March 23, 2021 at 2:44 PM Beautiful! Timothy Hicks April 7, 2021 at 10:24 PM Thanks Juliet!

Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2021 at 7:10 AM I’m looking forward to some new posts Timothy.:0) Timothy Hicks March 23, 2021 at 9:36 AM I have one new one anyway that I just posted.

David Smith February 28, 2021 at 10:49 PM Definitely one to think on regarding perspective and significance. Hope you are doing ok in 2021. Regards David in NZ

Quoth Theraven January 16, 2021 at 11:29 PM It was the the best (of times), it was the ..... in lost stars. -R

Weston Gregory November 11, 2020 at 4:58 PM stories are! this is a summary of a beautiful one this piece am finding says a lot. nicely done fam.

Charmaine Chircop October 16, 2020 at 12:07 PM Love love this..especially the before Adam named the Animals,God named the stars..WoW.

Poet Tacito October 4, 2020 at 8:41 PM Extremely thought-provoking, Tim! It's been ages since we've connected. This is Drake...but now I've changed my Poet name to start anew. :) Hope to reconnect soon! Cheers sir!

John Watt May 31, 2020 at 2:32 AM Timothy, call me a LOON, but I'd say you're already very good at this form. Amen to your message, plus I love the title and "stories hung aloft" ~ John

Maurice Rigoler May 22, 2020 at 6:46 PM Tim, are you back posting poems after so long an absence? If so, we're very happy to read your work. / Maurice

Vijay Pandit May 22, 2020 at 3:32 PM Your mind is exploring...so much to admire and wonder about as your poem does..you made me stop and think.

Richard Lamoureux May 22, 2020 at 12:33 PM Thanks for your visit, sorry for late response. ;0)

Jennifer Proxenos May 22, 2020 at 11:08 AM Hi Timothy - God - omnipotent, omnipresent and omniscient - since time immemorial - beautiful that he named the stars - but you connecting the dots is awesome! Blessings, Jennifer.

Harry Horsman May 20, 2020 at 1:32 AM Yes the form is a interesting one, so is the poetry, incidentally there is a River Lune in the uk..

Richard Lamoureux May 19, 2020 at 8:34 AM Interesting to think about. I wonder if a Zebra knows it’s a Zebra.

Brandy Nicole May 18, 2020 at 9:07 PM "Connecting the dots" I like that and it is so true. This is beautiful. Uplifting. I am drifting in the Stars that God named. : ) Brandy

Silent One May 18, 2020 at 4:53 PM Nice last line... You seem to be enjoying this form.

Mystic Rose Rose May 18, 2020 at 2:56 PM And I am glad God named the stars, he did a great job and so did you, xo