As a Spectator

Words emerging from your quill,
Blazing with effulgence,
Capering and crooning around,
In harmony or in dissonance.

Rhyming in a golden cage,
Flying around in splendid colors,
Or, in a greenish meadow,
Flying away in divine freedom.

The beads of words will last long,
In our minds, if threaded strong
Whether structured or unstructured
As I know, I’m your spectator.




Honorable Mention in STRAND no 650 any form any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hawkins Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 11:47 PM
What a beautiful Poem The beads of words will last long In our minds, if threaded strong. Sheer Poetry......Shirley
Somadas Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Thank you Shirley for your beautiful comment..
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 8:55 AM
This is one of the best I have read for the contest. Blessings Rick.
Somadas Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 10:32 PM
Thank you Rick...
Canerdy Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:00 PM
Descriptive, well-done, Jenish. Janice
Somadas Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Thank you Janice..
Vdev Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 11:17 AM
Very splendid poem. Strong words make lots of impact . You have written it well.
Somadas Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 10:33 PM
Thank you Johnson..
One Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 2:21 PM
this is brill...
Somadas Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 10:44 PM
Thank you...
Poetry Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Certain beads we wear a lifetime
Somadas Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Yes.. You are right.. Thanks..
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