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Words emerging from your quill, Blazing with effulgence, Capering and crooning around, In harmony or in dissonance. Rhyming in a golden cage, Flying around in splendid colors, Or, in a greenish meadow, Flying away in divine freedom. The beads of words will last long, In our minds, if threaded strong Whether structured or unstructured As I know, I’m your spectator. Honorable Mention in STRAND no 650 any form any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 12/5/2019 11:47:00 PM
What a beautiful Poem The beads of words will last long In our minds, if threaded strong. Sheer Poetry......Shirley
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/7/2019 10:43:00 PM
Thank you Shirley for your beautiful comment..
Date: 11/29/2019 8:55:00 AM
This is one of the best I have read for the contest. Blessings Rick.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/30/2019 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Rick...
Date: 11/27/2019 11:00:00 PM
Descriptive, well-done, Jenish. Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/27/2019 11:21:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 11/27/2019 11:17:00 AM
Very splendid poem. Strong words make lots of impact . You have written it well.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/27/2019 10:33:00 PM
Thank you Johnson..
Date: 11/21/2019 2:21:00 PM
this is brill...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/23/2019 10:44:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 11/21/2019 9:53:00 AM
Certain beads we wear a lifetime
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 11/23/2019 10:39:00 PM
Yes.. You are right.. Thanks..

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