As a Poet Sees

I think constant thoughts
turning them every which way
trying to convey

experience
as deeply
as this moment

from where I 
stand
sniffing a wine's bouquet

while a eucalyptus smoke wind
fills the dusk 
like life itself

and grape leaves
spun in sunlight grow
like spider's webs

spun invisibly
by dewdrops and
September's flow 

and still I don't know if words
will ever weave a life
as beautiful as I know

but surely
the words blow
across experience

giving magical glimpses of life
as a poet sees it and tries
to show it

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 5:21 AM
Love how you managed to tickles all senses in this poem. Lovely ~
Carber Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Great imagery, and it so well expresses the poet's mindset....
Watson Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 12:15 PM
I have a favourite spot on top of the cliffs overlooking the entrance to Whitby harbour . Once there my mind is in unison with yours. Great poem, Thank you
Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 5:31 PM
hmmm some of those with a wee bit of tweak could be fine haiku ;) I think you could end at the 7th verse? I've missed you where've you been? Happy Holidays Light & Love
Melugin Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Suz. I understand! You write,right and bright! Poets delight! You, my dear, are a poetic princess! My Best to you! in admiration of your art, chuck
Dome Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 5:41 PM
A really great write. enjoyed it very much. Well done. Peter Dome.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 11:41 AM
Yeah me too i write what i see n how i see it. I likd yor fab take on webs n spiders. U hav woven a fine silk of muse here pal. Merx xmas
Kithinji Avatar
December 6, 2013 at 8:41 AM
...these constant thoughts...
Sirak Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Fantastic! You wonderfully described how poets focus on the moments glimpsed between clicks of a camera shutter. The moments become our words. Your feelings are expressed so eloquently with your pen.
Ryerson Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 5:13 PM
No Suzanne, words cannot weave the beautiful life you lead, but yours come mighty close...Thanks SO very much for your wonderful comments and support...Coming from you it's a true honor - Tim
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Enjoyed reading your expressive and very poetic work this morning..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 5:59 PM
gorgeous writing. You are at your best writing this way, Suz!!
Tacito Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 9:07 AM
We do define how we live. This speaks such volumes. Awesome job!
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 4:41 AM
Nice thought into the making of the poetry, Suz
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