As

As fog saturates every living thing
Penetrating dampness coats trees and shrubs, flowers
Here in my aloneness my open heart bring
And I know upon me your grace will shower

"Here I am to worship, here I am to bow down
Here I am to say that you're my God
You're altogether lovely, altogether worthy
Altogether wonderful to me"

Thank you for your beauty, thank you for loving
Thank you for your gracious forgiveness
I want to say that you're my Holy God
Here I am once more only You I adore

As the sun cast red upon the horizon
Each bird sings their unique lovely song
The sounds of man's inventions nosily run
Where just earth's creatures' souns belong

What was it like before man's creativeness
Brought the noise of engines running loud and long
Just to be able to commune with nature's liveliness
And hear each creature's morning lovely song

"And here I am to worship, here I am to bow down
Here I am to say that you're my God
You're altogether lovely, altogether worthy
Altogether wonderful to me"

  

In quotation marks: Chris Tomlin
Hymn or Praise song
Here I Am Worship

This is a mixed writing 
Some rhyme and some not

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Dave Timperley

Date: 5/17/2013 3:02:00 PM

Oh I love this one, I love the chorus, it's one of my favorites. When we drive up into the Troodos Mountains as we will next week now that the rain has stopped until Christmas. We can just stop and listen to almost nothing...then you tune in to nature...lovely sounds. God Bless. Dave.

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/16/2013 7:44:00 AM

Hi Sara, I loved this poem, it made me feel so peaceful, your poems shows your inner depth so peaceful even if struggles of life are there. Love it. Love Terry xoxo it deserves a 7>> and a FAVE.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/15/2013 5:15:00 PM

Sara I was blessed just reading your wonderful poem...God bless...

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/15/2013 3:14:00 PM

You have praised God nicely through this beautiful poem. It's called creation. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/15/2013 1:38:00 PM

This is a tremendously awesome write my friend! You have enriched me by the splendor of this incredible poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/15/2013 11:53:00 AM

A rich write. See the nature dancing. Well done Sara! AO

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2013 10:33:00 AM

- It feels like a prayer - it is beautifully written Sara. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz

Date: 5/15/2013 8:42:00 AM

I didn't know Chris Tomlin before reading this poetic tribute of a fan. It looks to me very good for the natural ambience which ideally wraps Sara's whorship confirming her outstanding hability to write poems.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/15/2013 8:23:00 AM

This is once again beautiful-- love the syntax and also the way you make nature-- essence and ambience so real. Love the worship.. big fan of Chris Tomlin too.