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Arunansu

Arunansu your name is a river running smoothly through deep wooded rifts your poems are little paper boats carrying a candle of sandalwood and beeswax upon the night tree's ancient branch a black panther watches

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Date: 10/22/2017 6:06:00 AM
The name "Arunansu" sounds so very obviously Red Indian, yet there is a river in West Sussex (southern England) called the Arun...how very peculiar? Marvelous little write, Patricia. :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/23/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you someday I will tell you about Arunansu.
Date: 10/16/2017 10:42:00 PM
Charming - so exotic.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 11:08:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/16/2017 9:55:00 PM
Now this is so innocent and beguiling, right up to the moment that you steal my breath away. Well crafted and ingenious.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/16/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thank you Mark, Welcome to my home.

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