Artumes Armies

Harken...those hollowing drums
Over cold vales so beat,
Exhorting a multitude of glistening 
Star-tipped spears,
As marching over shattered landscapes
In shinning replete:
Crunch Artumes eternal legions
Across the snow bound years.

Casting down from the mauve 
And cloudless heights
The pale witch broods upon her dark
runes;
Chilled breath steaming mutterings 
Of meddling spite,
Uttered under Luna risings
Of half waxen moons.

Repulsed from the presence 
Of the holy alters sacred glow,
That cuts like a torch
Across Yules Feast of Lights,
She incants of harsh Boreas
To relent his fierce blowes:
Raising high her crystal towers
To breach the walls of stilled night.

Tis now, away from cheery hearths
And the warm fires they keep,
That warring frost tightens 
Upon this hardened land;
Happily sated people 
Turn in contented sleep;
Motionless vapours are crushed
In the grip of an iron clad hand.

For as the siege heightens
In relentless might
Heavens wheeling sentinels 
Begin to slowly withdraw:
Retreating upon spiraling orbits
Fading from diminishing sight;
Ghostly armies embarking 
For far frozen shores.

Loosen now the silver longships, 
Afloat on tides of drawing moonlight,
For the Red Goddess slumbers 
In deep canyons to the west;
Artumes armies sailing 
Into grey dawns fleeting respite...

Awaken... Oh Glorious Aurora...
Scattering your foes - 
Before Sunrises conquest!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 1/8/2018 5:53:00 PM
I was looking through your poems to find one I never read. Maybe there are some I have not seen. If you can think of any, please let me know!!
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John Fleming
Date: 1/14/2018 2:28:00 AM
Hello, Andrea. You have most likely scrutinized them all by now...for which I am very grateful. I am going to make a conscious effort this New Year to apply myself more vigorously to some writing; it is just a question of time with me...and working nights does not help. Catch up with you very soon, Andrea - cheers! :) john
Date: 9/24/2017 5:06:00 PM
This poem is so rich in details from legend that I feel I have been to a great feast. It will require many reads to glean all of the infrormation it holds. Thank you so much.
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Date: 10/1/2017 4:22:00 PM
You are most welcome, Patricia. The one single thing I miss the most from long years gone by, is, strangely enough, the cold, frosty Winters. The frost and ice used to be around for weeks at a time. Now, because the weather is so mild and wet, that is all gone. I miss those bright blue skies, the ground hard like iron, that weak sun that would warm through you when you got out of the winds sharp chill. Ahh well...happy days! :) john
Date: 9/18/2016 3:46:00 PM
Splendid. Favorite line: "Steaming mutterings Of meddling spite, Uttered under Luna risings Of half waxen moons." Glorious.
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Date: 9/24/2016 12:59:00 PM
Hi, Stanley. Thank you for the wonderful remarks...Please be assured that such encouraging comment as this are always much appreciated by me. My very best regards, Stanley! :) john
Date: 4/6/2015 7:03:00 PM
John, this is a brilliant piece of work. Truly enjoyed. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 4/12/2015 1:17:00 PM
Hi, Cynthia, nice to see you visiting again! Hope you are keeping well...Very best regards! :) john.
Date: 2/16/2015 3:45:00 AM
I enjoyed your clever poem. Alicia, xxx
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:13:00 PM
You are most welcome, Alicia. I am happy indeed that you enjoyed the read. Thank you for very kind comments! :) john.
Date: 2/10/2015 6:13:00 AM
Loved the vivid imagery, truly amazing!.
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Date: 2/10/2015 8:01:00 AM
You are most welcome, William! Many thanks for the visit and your kind words. :) john.
Date: 1/18/2015 2:39:00 AM
I enjoyed the rhythms of "the classics" you have structured into this write...makes me want reread the Aeneid!
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Date: 1/18/2015 6:10:00 AM
Thanks, Peter! I have to confess I have never read Virgils classic. I will have to take a look at it sometime. :-) john.
Date: 1/17/2015 10:49:00 AM
You have got to be the poet at Soup whose poems have the most classic feel to them, and in a very good way, for it is clear that you put a lot of thought into using the best words to describe your scenes and characters. WEll done.
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! You have paid me the finest compliment about my poems that i have ever received; here or anywhere...i am greatly indebted!! :) john.
Date: 1/13/2015 9:43:00 PM
What can I say? I give it a "7" and it's now a favorite of mine.
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Date: 1/14/2015 4:09:00 AM
Thank you, M.L, for your visit, kind compliments, and the seven vote...it is very much appreciated!! :-) john.
Date: 1/13/2015 1:49:00 PM
a stirring call to arms with a legendary streak to it...what a mighty and yet lyrical write, john.. huggs
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:52:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. I am still tinkering with it. Lol! :) john.
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