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Arts and Crafts From Grains of Sand

Life is a smile of a newborn in mother's arms Arts and crafts of stained glass from grains of sand Freedom of a chick on its very first flight Love of a mother scurrying beside a young fawn Float on a lotus pond in style of white swans Lyrics of nature scripted in nightingale's song Painting in vermilion tints rising on meadows of fall Rivers rushing down from spring mountaintops Romance in lover's eyes watching a new dawn Wonder in breath of a single-celled amoeba September 14, 2019 HM: Strand special 5 by Brian Strand Life poetry contest; Sponsor: Ironic Zink

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/20/2019 9:10:00 AM

Enjoyable to read again. Thanks for your visit to my Eaten By The World poem.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/19/2019 8:48:00 PM

This is so beautiful Vijay: The imagery is awesome. Good Luck and into my Favs. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2019 7:36:00 AM

Much appreciate SuZ..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/18/2019 8:40:00 AM

How wonderous and sweet is life into your striking poetry, dear Vijay! I tremendously enjoyed a soothing read! Indeed, it is a wonder! and of course a FAV! My warmest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/18/2019 4:31:00 PM

Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Besma..many thanks. And special thank you for the FAVE. Regards!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 9/16/2019 6:01:00 AM

"Wonder in breath of a single-celled amoeba"- a different version to describe the beauty of life. You captured it Vijay, in the best way.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:57:00 AM

I liked that last line as well..much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Swetha..many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2019 7:11:00 PM

I had no iota of an idea what was wanted from this contest, but I sure love how you did the challenge. HOpe you score with this gem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:56:00 AM

Not sure I do either, Andrea..so I used lines of metaphors to evoke life..many thanks..much appreciate.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/15/2019 12:04:00 PM

I like your life Poem, you gave it substance.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Richard for your visit and kind remarks--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/15/2019 7:17:00 AM

Again, I say you are a MASTER of description. This is absolutely beautiful, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:55:00 AM

A very nice thing to say, Janice..you are always so kind--much appreciate..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/14/2019 10:03:00 PM

Life is a smile, the freedom of love floating in song. Painting of romance. A breath of wonder. Simply leaving us awe. I couldn't resist Vijay, wrapping your thoughts around mine, in my comment. This is beautiful. So uplifting. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:54:00 AM

They sound so much better in your comments--much appreciate as always, Brandy..many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/14/2019 1:54:00 PM

So well written. I enjoyed this very much Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Heidi--much appreciate, as always.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/14/2019 12:49:00 PM

All we have to do is open our eyes to see the wonder and beauty God has created. A fine piece my friend. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:52:00 AM

Yes, indeed--many thanks for the visit and comments, Judy--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2019 11:36:00 AM

- Art covers so much, Vijay ... everything that is beautiful to see or hear :) - A beautiful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:52:00 AM

Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/14/2019 9:45:00 AM

some much beauty within life and nature if one knows how where to look....beautifully penned my friend :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:51:00 AM

So true--it is everywhere. I meant all lines as metaphors. Many thanks, Sandy.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/14/2019 9:00:00 AM

The birth of a human, a creature, a season, a romance, a painting of meadows in fall - all are breathtaking! Your last line sums everything up beautifully Vijay -'Wonder in breath of a single celled amoeba' - a clever write indeed. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:50:00 AM

You are very kind. as always my friend..much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/14/2019 6:57:00 AM

Best in the contest and blessings for you

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/16/2019 8:48:00 AM

Much appreciate the good wishes, Regina--many thanks.