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Artistic Touch

~Artistic Touch~ Go down on my thoughts taste my perception Touch me in all non physical ways I need what is considered to be the exception Show my heart colors in brilliant arrays Give me artistic orgasms in multiple Let enlightenment drip from my ears Others may find it to be incomprehensible Don't let touch be what interferes

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Pratap Roy

Date: 1/5/2020 10:45:00 PM

Very well done. Good poetic expression. God bless your poetic journey.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/6/2020 1:53:00 AM

Thank you so much!;)

Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 6:05:00 AM

Another fav for me Brenda. Fantastic write :-) x

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/13/2019 11:33:00 AM

Elaine thank you so much!;)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 11/13/2019 12:12:00 AM

Nice romantic artistic expressions.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/13/2019 11:33:00 AM

Juliet thank you!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2019 7:37:00 PM

Platonic ecstasy penned wonderfully here, my friend. Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/11/2019 4:49:00 PM

Thank you Gershon I love reading your comments!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2019 9:00:00 AM

Myself I like emotional and physical in concert. Passionate tension to elicit delicious vibrations. Waiting followed by resolution and release. Secrets whispered in her ear, moans of anticipation. Grasping and pulling, pushing into need and desire. It seems you have painted my mind in passionate brush strokes. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/9/2019 4:07:00 PM

Haha! Rick thank you! Your comment was very informative! Glad I could bring the passion out!;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/9/2019 7:48:00 AM

Bodacious brushstrokes sis...all of a sudden, I have an urge to paint...Picasso or Van Gogh?...maybe etch a sketch lol...love bro bro :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/9/2019 7:52:00 AM

Lol so silly bro bro! Thank you so much for your comments are always so silly! Picasso I think you could do etch a sketch always gives me trouble! Haha!;)

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/9/2019 7:34:00 AM

Sapiosexual B, that's how real love should be. I hope you can find yours one day.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/9/2019 7:39:00 AM

Ahh thanks TS! Yes it is to be courted(for lack of a better word) by an non touch is wonderful! One day maybe but not pushing it! If it comes it does if not oh well!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/9/2019 7:26:00 AM

Oh how back in the day the guy would win a woman over by stimulating her mind just by conversation and mere presence! I’d like to go back to those days unless they still exist...I love the first two lines...a good way to get the reader involved. INK

Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/9/2019 7:37:00 AM

Haha thanks G I like to think that they do still exist! Where would life be if they didn't! Nothing better than to swoon over the best way ever!;)