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artificial beauty

i have this friend back in high school she was known to be one of the most beautiful people didn't notice it's just her make-up and when a sudden rain came and wash her face up poor creature, she was laughed by all

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Date: 3/21/2016 9:59:00 PM
Gen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:33:00 PM
Gen, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:29:00 PM
A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief
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Date: 11/27/2013 6:06:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup I hope to read more of your verses soon. Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2013 11:33:00 AM
Sorry for her, It better to let people hate you for who you are than treasure a doll you are not.. I have your lesson Gen
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