Artificial Beauty

i have this friend back in high school
she was known to be one of the most beautiful
people didn't notice it's just her make-up
and when a sudden rain came and wash her face up
poor creature, she was laughed by all
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Agustin Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 11:48 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Gen, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Gen, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Ekechukwu Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:29 PM
A wonderful write,kudos! Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief
Guzzi Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 6:06 PM
Welcome to the Soup I hope to read more of your verses soon. Light & Love
Roger  Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 11:33 AM
Sorry for her, It better to let people hate you for who you are than treasure a doll you are not.. I have your lesson Gen
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