Artic Avians

Arctic avians
screech zenith zero zephyrs...
dank December bones
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September 18, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Hello, Gerard here to say hi, and i hope you don't mind my double comment on your poem of thanks. I had to re- comment before I exit the soup for the day.. LOL.) or for a while,..p.d.
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June 24, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The natural Thing to Do". Love, Carol
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June 16, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Got a chuckle out of this even though it is not suppose to be funny...Excellent choice of wording...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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June 14, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Wow....this is quite amazing....you have exceeded above and beyond with this wonderful haiku!! Great work, Gerard! ~ Carrie
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June 13, 2010 at 10:48 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.-Charles
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June 13, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Apt images to express your thought. Nice alliteration. Good luck, gerard. And thanks for your comments Blame it on winter. I have taught English Literature in the university for 30 years. The Elizabethans were my favorites. Today I have posted my Sonnet written on Optimist Park inspired by P.B.Shelly's Ozymandias. Thanks again
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June 13, 2010 at 8:37 PM
Interesting use of alliteration. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing. Karen
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June 13, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Nice use of alliteration in this "chilling" winter haiku, Gerard! Good work. Love, Carolyn
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