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Artic avians

Arctic avians screech zenith zero zephyrs... dank December bones

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Date: 9/18/2010 4:04:00 PM
Hello, Gerard here to say hi, and i hope you don't mind my double comment on your poem of thanks. I had to re- comment before I exit the soup for the day.. LOL.) or for a while,..p.d.
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "The natural Thing to Do". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:30:00 AM
Got a chuckle out of this even though it is not suppose to be funny...Excellent choice of wording...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:40:00 AM
Wow....this is quite have exceeded above and beyond with this wonderful haiku!! Great work, Gerard! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:48:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.-Charles
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:06:00 PM
Apt images to express your thought. Nice alliteration. Good luck, gerard. And thanks for your comments Blame it on winter. I have taught English Literature in the university for 30 years. The Elizabethans were my favorites. Today I have posted my Sonnet written on Optimist Park inspired by P.B.Shelly's Ozymandias. Thanks again
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:37:00 PM
Interesting use of alliteration. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:49:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration in this "chilling" winter haiku, Gerard! Good work. Love, Carolyn
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