Lucilla Carrillo Poet Acrostic

Arthur Vaso

Arthur Vaso       ( Acrostic )

A...Aboard this roller coaster world - we all are.
R...replacements for us are not any.
T...Today we are here, to do the best we can.
H...Heaven on this Earth - we will never find.
U...Unless it's in a dream.
R...Remember to always stand for what you believe in.

V...Victory at the end will be yours.
A...Always give thanks to God for what you have.
S...Somwtimes life is not easy.
O...Our time here is not forever... 

01/30/2914
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Arthur Vaso February 9, 2014 at 9:18 PM Hello again!! I feel like myself again with my real name back!! Such a beautiful poem, you really made me feel special!!!! thank you!!!

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2014 at 12:23 PM ok, I came back and found his last name was in the acrostic. I will go check him out!

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2014 at 8:08 PM this is very nice. Is this man a friend of yours that you are doing a tribute for? Is it someone famous? A well done acrostic, dear.

Donna Jones February 7, 2014 at 8:22 PM Lucilla...a lovely written poem for I take it a dear friend....of things we shouldn't take for granted...very nice..

Bl Devnath February 5, 2014 at 12:04 PM Excellent poem read now my lovely friend. You have beautifully adorned few truths of life with deep reality. Loved always, bl

Christine Phillips February 2, 2014 at 8:19 AM Nice message, the truth well spoken.

Matthew Anish February 1, 2014 at 10:21 PM This poem is interesting. You have a number of typos which you should correct. Who is Arthur Vasco? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Cathy Moore February 1, 2014 at 7:35 PM I really enjoyed reading

Chuck Melugin February 1, 2014 at 12:37 PM 7+ Lucilla, Epitome of encouragement! Wondrous writing! Hugs, chuck

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2014 at 12:06 PM superb dedication for arthur, lucy.. what a pleasant write that uplifts!.. hugggs

Arthur Vaso January 31, 2014 at 10:00 PM Of course I have to say, this is the best poem in the world! Sure sounds like a great guy!!!!! :)

Ken Carroll January 31, 2014 at 1:51 PM Awesome tribute acrostic Lucilla..

Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2014 at 3:29 AM - So beautifully written to Arthur Vasco, Lucilla. - Very well done :))) - Have a enjoyable weekend, relax my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Boskovski January 30, 2014 at 11:15 PM Hello Lucilla! What a cleverly written Acrostic poem you have wrote. It is very creative and you have captured the essence of everyday life. I feel the concept and metaphor you pass through this poem, and may I add a lovely and grand job you have done here. I love this poem, very creative. Hugs and kisses all around for you my Lucilla xoxo :)

Robert Pettit January 30, 2014 at 4:26 PM You made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely here.

Chris Hardy January 30, 2014 at 3:17 PM I enjoyed reading this very much....glad I stopped by...Blessings, Christy