Artemisia, Part 7 of 12

(One of Artemisia's paintings deals with
this story, found only in the Catholic and 
Orthodox bibles.  Susannah is sexually
bullied by two old men, but the young
Daniel passes by and condemns the 
culprits.) 


Susannah and the Elders

Legs bare, she padded to the river’s edge
to bathe her body.  Slipping off her slip,
and setting free her hair, she cleared the sedge
and waded in, to take her morning dip.

Ah, lust is the dominion of the young!
The two old men who watched, provoke disgust
in us.  High in the branches where they hung,
demanded sex, or else …  well, such is lust!

Along the forest path, a decent youth
named Daniel chanced to pass.  No fawning spaniel
when faced with elders, he.  Perceived the truth.
Condemned the lechers, innocence set free.   
A Daniel come to judgment! yea, a Daniel!
O wise young judge, how I do honor thee!
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 12:42 PM
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White Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:00 PM
But in the silence of my bed, I cry // For sometimes I am just that kid that shy // and awed, and emo sees unfold // a story that in court he, too, once told.
Coy Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Marvellous! Keep going!
White Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 1:38 PM
Beautiful sonnet, depicting this painting. I won't say a lot here, because I know 5 more poems are yet to come.
Coy Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 1:54 PM
It's fantastic to have such an enthusiastic (and knowledgeable) analyst at work!
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