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Art L S Lowry

( Coming home from the mill. ) Air full of smog from dirty factory chimney people walking around square quite nimbly, grey clouds above small terraces workers abodes typical northern town with narrow cobbled roads, Local shop owners struggle to make both ends meet children with no socks or shoes on their feet, family men hope for a day's work to pay rent to feed all his children that to him were god sent, wives with baskets looking for bargain goods so poor though happy with their neighborhoods, men hope to earn extra money for a small bet women on hands and knees cleaning door step, clean clothes pegged out uniformly on washing line smell of fresh linen, carbolic or fragrant pine, sparse food deliveries are made by horse and carts factory workers full of hope and bleeding hearts, communities of northern England full of respect where life was so hard and would never be perfect. Composed 25th April 2017. Contest:-celebration of art.

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Date: 5/26/2017 4:28:00 AM
Your poem paintsa picture of the people's lives, just like the painting. Congrats on yoru win, Roy.
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/26/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Agnes, I enjoyed writing this and the contest. :))
Date: 5/25/2017 7:24:00 PM
I have always enjoyed Lowry's work, and you have done the British master justice here with this wonderful poem! Congrats! A 7 for sure!
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Date: 5/26/2017 2:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Greg, totally agree Lowry is one of the masters, thanks again for your support and generosity, Roy. :))
Date: 5/25/2017 5:38:00 PM
Back to give you my congratulations on your first placement Roy! I knew this would do well in the contest! 7 ; )
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/25/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie for your very kind comment, I enjoyed writing this poem and I'm grateful to Kim for giving me the opportunity and placement, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 5/25/2017 5:21:00 PM
Great choice of artist Roy - but now I;ve got that pesky matchstick men song running through my brain!:-)congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/25/2017 5:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Jan, your right it is a very catchy tune, I find his works so interesting and represents the life and times of the industrial revolution, thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 5/25/2017 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win! Well-deserved and a 7! Best regards. Pandita
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/25/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and generosity Pandita, really enjoyed this contest, thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 5/25/2017 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Roy. nicely detailed description of this Lowry painting. // Barry
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/25/2017 6:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Barry for your very kind comment, I found this contest so inertesting and informative, thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 5/25/2017 12:04:00 AM
I enjoyed your vivid description. "Children with no socks or shoes on their feet" grabs the heartstrings!
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/25/2017 5:23:00 AM
So pleased you enjoyed this poem Kim, I find all Lowry's works so interesting, can't express how pleased I am, thank you so much, Roy. :))
Date: 5/24/2017 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Indeed, our PS art gallery is divine! I will return to comment on your individual poem. Blessings...Kim
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/25/2017 5:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placing in your contest Kim, I found this most interesting and informative, finding about artist that Were unknown to me, I would also thank you for all the work you put into organising and judging which is really appreciated, thanks again, Roy. :))
Date: 5/4/2017 8:45:00 AM
Your wonderful poem contains the emotions of the times in the struggles and the joys. Brilliant Roy! This is sure to do well in the contest. 7 ; )
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Date: 5/4/2017 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Connie, I haven't got a lot of knowledge on art works but I find works by Lowry so interesting, thanks again for your support, generosity and support. :))

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