Art.

If I drew us together,
you couldn't tell we've been apart.
You could never tell you were the one,
who broke my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
May 5, 2010 at 5:08 AM
so sad, we all hurt and are hurt by our loved ones in life...
Budd Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 2:24 PM
I totally agree. So short but so meaningful. Nice write. :)
Cochrane Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:37 PM
So simple and yet so much feeling and dream flowing from the words. I really like this. ~KC
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