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Blue Small Our child Our wee girl Too small to draw breath She wanted our love so dearly Could not wait to know us and greet this glorious world Yet she arrived early, and now sleeps eternal in the security of your arms ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Writing Challenge January 2019 - Fibonacci" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor. * This form is called "Fibonacci" and contains a syllable count of 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21 ... syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com. *

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Constance La France

Date: 1/13/2019 10:26:00 AM

Gregory, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Fibonacci and I love the image too ~

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Constance, I was SO excited to see this placement, and humbled to be listed with such wonderful poets. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2019 8:32:00 AM

- Congratulations on a beautiful winning poem, Gregory :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:37:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Joseph May

Date: 1/12/2019 5:29:00 PM

A heartfelt write Greg..Congrats on your win..

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:37:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Joseph - blessings, my friend! :-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2019 1:49:00 PM

Hi Greg, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Alexis - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2019 1:20:00 PM

Heart wrenching, Gregory. Congrats on your most deserving win.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Line - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2019 1:00:00 PM

A sad and touching fibonacci, Greg. I'm sure Dear Heart will like your entry and you made excellent use of a brief form to convey your message. Best wishes in the contest. Sent you a Soup mail. Have a great day, Carolyn

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/7/2019 6:41:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Carolyn, thank you so much ... I will check out your Soupie and reply soon! Blessings! :-) <3

Eve Roper

Date: 1/6/2019 7:38:00 PM

Beautiful poem, but so very sad, Greg.. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/7/2019 6:40:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3