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Image result for miscarriage


Blue

Small

Our child

Our wee girl

Too small to draw breath

She wanted our love so dearly

Could not wait to know us and greet this glorious world

Yet she arrived early, and now sleeps eternal in the security of your arms




~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Writing Challenge January 2019 - Fibonacci" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor.

* This form is called "Fibonacci" and contains a syllable count of 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21 ... syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com. *

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Date: 1/13/2019 10:26:00 AM
Gregory, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Fibonacci and I love the image too ~
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, I was SO excited to see this placement, and humbled to be listed with such wonderful poets. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/13/2019 8:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on a beautiful winning poem, Gregory :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/12/2019 5:29:00 PM
A heartfelt write Greg..Congrats on your win..
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Joseph - blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 1/12/2019 5:16:00 PM
Hello friend! Congratulations on your win. Tears spilled from this heartbreaking poem. Best to you! :) xx
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Chantelle - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/12/2019 1:49:00 PM
Hi Greg, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Alexis - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/12/2019 1:20:00 PM
Heart wrenching, Gregory. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 3/3/2019 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Line - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/7/2019 1:00:00 PM
A sad and touching fibonacci, Greg. I'm sure Dear Heart will like your entry and you made excellent use of a brief form to convey your message. Best wishes in the contest. Sent you a Soup mail. Have a great day, Carolyn
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/7/2019 6:41:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Carolyn, thank you so much ... I will check out your Soupie and reply soon! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 1/6/2019 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful poem, but so very sad, Greg.. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory R Barden
Date: 1/7/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3