Gregory Richard Barden Poet Fibonacci

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Arrived Yet Early

Blue

Small

Our child

Our wee girl

Too small to draw breath

She wanted our love so dearly

Could not wait to know us and greet this glorious world

Yet she arrived early, and now sleeps eternal in the security of your arms




~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Writing Challenge January 2019 - Fibonacci" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor.

* This form is called "Fibonacci" and contains a syllable count of 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21 ... syllables counted at HowManySyllables.com. *

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Constance La France January 13, 2019 at 10:26 AM Gregory, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Fibonacci and I love the image too ~ Gregory Richard Barden March 3, 2019 at 1:38 AM Thank you so much, Constance, I was SO excited to see this placement, and humbled to be listed with such wonderful poets. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2019 at 8:32 AM - Congratulations on a beautiful winning poem, Gregory :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden March 3, 2019 at 1:37 AM Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Joseph May January 12, 2019 at 5:29 PM A heartfelt write Greg..Congrats on your win.. Gregory Richard Barden March 3, 2019 at 1:37 AM Thank you so very much, Joseph - blessings, my friend! :-)

Alexis Y. January 12, 2019 at 1:49 PM Hi Greg, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis Gregory Richard Barden March 3, 2019 at 1:36 AM Thank you so very much, Alexis - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier January 12, 2019 at 1:20 PM Heart wrenching, Gregory. Congrats on your most deserving win. Gregory Richard Barden March 3, 2019 at 1:36 AM Thank you so very much, Line - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Carolyn Devonshire January 7, 2019 at 1:00 PM A sad and touching fibonacci, Greg. I'm sure Dear Heart will like your entry and you made excellent use of a brief form to convey your message. Best wishes in the contest. Sent you a Soup mail. Have a great day, Carolyn Gregory Richard Barden January 7, 2019 at 6:41 PM That's very kind of you, Carolyn, thank you so much ... I will check out your Soupie and reply soon! Blessings! :-) <3

Eve Roper January 6, 2019 at 7:38 PM Beautiful poem, but so very sad, Greg.. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`* Gregory Richard Barden January 7, 2019 at 6:40 PM Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3