Arrival of Winter

The cool chill of the winter
Shivers down, the spine of trees
Leaves harden with frost

As sun brings warmth
Helping grass from coming cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 1, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Beautiful descriptions throughout in this write, that opening is really intriguing and eloquent in many ways, perfectly setting up the atmosphere for the reader! I can almost see the winter winds strolling across earth and then the sun embraces us with its warmth!
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November 1, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it :-)
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October 31, 2023 at 6:27 AM
A good poem description of the coming winter. Well done.
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October 31, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Thanks
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October 31, 2023 at 4:05 AM
You described it very well..
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October 31, 2023 at 4:28 AM
Thanks!
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