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Arrival of a Goddess

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For Write Eleven Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest/ Sponsor: Constance La France

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“You know how it is with an April day when the sun is out and the wind is still; you’re one month on in the middle of May.” —Robert Frost, Two Tramps in Mud Time I watch this April day as dawn arrives . . . with grace she lays a gilded glaze upon my greening lawn spreading it out like sweet butter. How beautifully night has yielded to the magic of her gloss. I run behind my house to glimpse the goddess as she spills a plenitude of honey onto my blooming yellow daffodils, and I behold my garden touched by gold.

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Date: 4/21/2025 9:39:00 AM
Love this one - beautiful imagery
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Date: 4/19/2025 10:29:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your wonderful write again. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 4/18/2025 3:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem, tranquil and relaxing. Well done Andrea.
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Date: 4/16/2025 10:31:00 AM
Like this picturesque poem. eautiful spring time. Nice poem.
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Date: 4/15/2025 11:28:00 PM
A very nice graphic poem.Wish you the best
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Date: 4/15/2025 3:47:00 PM
Now this is lovely poetry. I believe you really have daffodils? Imagery is captivating. I had a crazy party with my 11 lines. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 4/15/2025 12:09:00 PM
What a wonderful write you have here with great pictures. "Good luck" Have a wonderful spring day and a Blessed Easter..........
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Date: 4/15/2025 12:02:00 PM
- Spring is bathing in gold, Andrea :) - A lovely poem :) - GL in the contest :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/15/2025 7:48:00 AM
delicious, she is really goddess, metaphors are fine, enjoyed
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Date: 4/15/2025 7:20:00 AM
Ah those are gorgeous pictures sweet andrea! And i think your quote as well as arrangement of lines etc would be poetically pleasing for the judge too! I absolutely love how beautifully you write! I wish i can writ beautiful! I especially love "How beautifully night has yielded to the magic of her gloss" magic of gloss! Wow! Love that! A fave this is for me! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/15/2025 6:18:00 AM
Lovely write, dear Andrea! Bright and buttery, touched by gold!
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