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Inspired by a waking dream.

Wait a minute, in my dream last night I met the guy who fit just right Vivid memory coming through Of me finally meeting you Golden purple dreamy haze Moments caught inside your gaze Touches, kisses, magic, whole In this dream filled time we stole Laughing, grinning, soft caresses Holding hearts and healing stresses Exploring childlike what we bring Playful Fingers wandering I've held your hand inside my mind Now it's warmth is real this time I've seen your face and your eyes staring And now I feel their gentle caring Your taste your touch your look and smell Tantalizing treat, all is well Electric senses, heart pounds like thunder Kiss your body with gentle wonder Legs and arms like tree roots twisted Sweet sensations, bodies misted Grinning wide with tickled feet Outrageously perfect and complete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/18/2014 2:19:00 PM
Scott, As you will come to know, I write mostly in Rhyme form. You seem to stick to a pleasant meter and it brings easier reading for the reader. This is a perfect meter verse. I believe there are a couple of typos that can be edited out, but that does not detract from the theme and structure of your fine work...... Regards... Jake
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