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Inspired by a waking dream.

Arrival

Wait a minute, in my dream last night
I met the guy who fit just right
Vivid memory coming through
Of me finally meeting you

Golden purple dreamy haze
Moments caught inside your gaze
Touches, kisses, magic, whole
In this dream filled time we stole 

Laughing, grinning, soft caresses
Holding hearts and healing stresses
Exploring childlike what we bring
Playful Fingers wandering 

I've held your hand inside my mind
Now it's warmth is real this time
I've seen your face and your eyes staring 
And now I feel their gentle caring

Your taste your touch your look and smell 
Tantalizing treat, all is well 
Electric senses, heart pounds like thunder 
Kiss your body with gentle wonder

Legs and arms like tree roots twisted
Sweet sensations, bodies misted
Grinning wide with tickled feet
Outrageously perfect and complete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 18, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Scott, As you will come to know, I write mostly in Rhyme form. You seem to stick to a pleasant meter and it brings easier reading for the reader. This is a perfect meter verse. I believe there are a couple of typos that can be edited out, but that does not detract from the theme and structure of your fine work...... Regards... Jake
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