Arouse the Atmosphere

Shadows of unborn tears steal the morn-glow
with flames of fear in the skies
-let the Rainbow revenge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 8, 2014 at 8:07 PM
Adeleke, Congratulations, on your win.......LUV* LINDA
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:02 AM
ADELEKE,, :) Enjoyed the 3 lines. Congrats on the win. Love ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:57 AM
very atmospheric Adeleke congrats on win hugs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:06 AM
wow!!! i love the rainbow taking a revenge how colorful and lively it is.. :) kudos!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Very wonderful Adeleke ! Congrats on worthy great win !
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 1:53 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Debbie's contest, adeleke
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:32 PM
VEry original, Adeleke. Congrats for your win.
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Very cleverly written. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sietesantos Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Excellent write!
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