Around the Corner

The flower fairies congregate
around the lily pool then wait
until the stars' resplendent light
illuminate each floating pad.

To taste the sound of petals' song
how quietly... they drift along
above the grove, all clothed in flames
till pixies scatter dust on boughs.

And winging through the air-brushed haze
each little feather gleams anew,
their lacy sequins all ablaze
with varnished gauze of every blue.

Through morning's rise, they’ll fade from view
like stepping stones from me to you...
if you believe, glide far away
around the corner, there's a wand!


Francine Roberts' Around The Corner
by nette onclaud
10/17/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/31/2014 2:27:00 PM
Though I'm not a fan of the fantastic, this is a step above most fairyland pieces I've read. Love that last line. Congrats on a super make-believe poem.
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Date: 12/31/2014 2:15:00 PM
Here to congratulate you on your win, would of loved to see this one higher on the list.
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Date: 12/31/2014 9:02:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette
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Date: 12/31/2014 7:12:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/31/2014 1:51:00 AM
A great poem,congrats on the win and happy new year nette...huggs
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Date: 12/31/2014 1:38:00 AM
congrats nette on your win in the contest, great job
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Date: 10/19/2014 8:55:00 AM
this totally bewitches the senses a master piece Nette gl in contest hugs fav
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:35:00 PM
a wand, huh? that is apropos for you, Nette, you are a wizard wordsmith and I can easily see a wand being around your corner!!
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:20:00 PM
Your poem is so beautiful and magical. I wish so much they were real. GL Nette
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Date: 10/17/2014 6:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this sure to be winning work..It has good rhythm and rhyme..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2014 6:20:00 PM
Excellent! Great way to get to Around The Corner, this is one of the most creative ones I have seen on this theme. As always the composition is flawless.
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Date: 10/17/2014 6:15:00 PM
Dear me! I want to see these fairies so bad. Your wording, phrasing and rhyming--- delicate and impeccable. Nette, this light airy poem carried me along a flowing pool of fantasy.
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Date: 10/17/2014 6:03:00 PM
Perfection. You took me to a world so whimsical and innocent like a corner in the fae-like sky. Brilliant is your middle name, Nette; had fun with your last contest with thanks!
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Date: 10/17/2014 5:45:00 PM
those flower fairies certainly do a lot of night work, a joy to read my friend..good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/17/2014 5:32:00 PM
simply charming with wonderful imagery Nette- good luck in the contest - this will place high:-0 hugs Jan xxx
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