Joanna Daniel Poet Haiku

Around the Corner

       longing for romance
   passion to light up my world
is it not the right time yet?

soon doors must open
   is love around the corner?
      God sends butterfly kisses



07.11.2021


For William Kekaula's "Ni (2) Katuata" contest

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Aniruddha Pathak July 29, 2021 at 5:43 AM Wow, your poem I feel must open many doors, a welcome win, congrats

Sam Kauffman July 19, 2021 at 10:32 AM So special, Jo! Love the thought of God, the hopeless romantic, sending butterfly kisses! You have set the sense of anticipation so well. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!

Quoth Theraven July 18, 2021 at 9:01 PM Jo Daniel, Lovely call to arms in your two Haiku. May the doors open. -Richard

Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2021 at 1:45 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I love your line, "God sends butterfly kisses." He Does. Enjoy your win with blessings........

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2021 at 1:26 PM Back with congrats!

Marilene Evans July 17, 2021 at 10:49 AM Congratulations, Jo. Beautiful piece.

Christuraj Alex July 17, 2021 at 12:26 AM Beautifully composed. I tried. Could not. Congratulations!

William Kelii Kekaula July 16, 2021 at 11:33 PM Our divine intercessor constants us, consoling our hearts to find each other. An exceptional piece, Jo, as my corner turned into a home. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2021 at 5:05 PM A double meaning there both a love on earth and the heavenly groom of the bride of Christ.

Caren Krutsinger July 13, 2021 at 8:44 AM There is always hope, this poem reminds us it is His timing, not ours.

Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2021 at 7:25 AM Love sometimes takes its time rounding the corner. When it does I hope it will have been worth the wait. Blessings Rick.

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2021 at 2:34 PM splendid job on this one. I want to try it now.

Regina Mcintosh July 11, 2021 at 5:30 PM Love this. God bless you . Love, Gina

CayCay Godwin July 11, 2021 at 4:13 PM I LOVE God sending butterfly kisses, the line absolutely thrilled my delight. I wrote one, but haven't posted it yet. Truly enjoyed your talent! All the best, all the time ... CayCay

Mystic Rose Rose July 11, 2021 at 11:37 AM God always sends butterfly kisses your whole life, when you don't have a partner, he sends you double the amount :) much love Jo, much love and kisses

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 11, 2021 at 10:31 AM What a pleasure this was to read, Jo! Good luck with this fine contest entry. :D

Victor Buhagiar July 11, 2021 at 6:39 AM This should be a lovely poem for the contest. Best of luck.

Tom Cunningham July 11, 2021 at 4:39 AM Her day will come but not just yet. Lovely haiku Jo that speaks of innocence, love the gif. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Jan Allison July 11, 2021 at 4:37 AM absolutely delightful Jo a poem full of hope for the future and I love the image:-) hugs Jan xx