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around the corner

longing for romance passion to light up my world is it not the right time yet? soon doors must open is love around the corner? God sends butterfly kisses 07.11.2021 For William Kekaula's "Ni (2) Katuata" contest

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Date: 7/29/2021 5:43:00 AM
Wow, your poem I feel must open many doors, a welcome win, congrats
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Date: 7/19/2021 10:32:00 AM
So special, Jo! Love the thought of God, the hopeless romantic, sending butterfly kisses! You have set the sense of anticipation so well. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you!
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Date: 7/18/2021 9:01:00 PM
Jo Daniel, Lovely call to arms in your two Haiku. May the doors open. -Richard
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Date: 7/17/2021 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I love your line, "God sends butterfly kisses." He Does. Enjoy your win with blessings........
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Date: 7/17/2021 1:26:00 PM
Back with congrats!
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Date: 7/17/2021 11:46:00 AM
I love your last line in particular, Jo. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/17/2021 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations, Jo. Beautiful piece.
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:26:00 AM
Beautifully composed. I tried. Could not. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/16/2021 11:33:00 PM
Our divine intercessor constants us, consoling our hearts to find each other. An exceptional piece, Jo, as my corner turned into a home. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 7/15/2021 5:05:00 PM
A double meaning there both a love on earth and the heavenly groom of the bride of Christ.
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Date: 7/13/2021 8:44:00 AM
There is always hope, this poem reminds us it is His timing, not ours.
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Date: 7/13/2021 7:25:00 AM
Love sometimes takes its time rounding the corner. When it does I hope it will have been worth the wait. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 7/12/2021 2:34:00 PM
splendid job on this one. I want to try it now.
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Date: 7/11/2021 5:30:00 PM
Love this. God bless you . Love, Gina
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:13:00 PM
I LOVE God sending butterfly kisses, the line absolutely thrilled my delight. I wrote one, but haven't posted it yet. Truly enjoyed your talent! All the best, all the time ... CayCay
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Date: 7/11/2021 11:37:00 AM
God always sends butterfly kisses your whole life, when you don't have a partner, he sends you double the amount :) much love Jo, much love and kisses
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Date: 7/11/2021 10:31:00 AM
What a pleasure this was to read, Jo! Good luck with this fine contest entry. :D
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Date: 7/11/2021 6:39:00 AM
This should be a lovely poem for the contest. Best of luck.
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:39:00 AM
Her day will come but not just yet. Lovely haiku Jo that speaks of innocence, love the gif. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:37:00 AM
absolutely delightful Jo a poem full of hope for the future and I love the image:-) hugs Jan xx
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