Richard Lamoureux Poet Rhyme

Around His Happy

She bent her light around his happy
A symphonic complicency 
Illuminating their velocity 

He radiated her in semicircular lines
She his rainbow in a night sky
Uncontainable so he let her fly

He flew with her for a time
His notes traveling along her breeze
Harmonizing within those upper keys

He marveled at her lovely
Grasped at the edges of her infinity
Felt blessed by her fluidity

Yet her light travels to fast
His to hold only for a time
Eventually light travels a straight line

The essence of her in moon lit sky
With angel wings she makes her flight
Around his happy she bent her light


Dedicated to Bernard Colasurdo after rereading 
the poem he wrote for his wife titled "A Love Letter"

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Lynn Marie August 20, 2016 at 4:49 PM Wow...so beautiful..a most endearing "dedication" penned with obvious heart.. inspired by an enduring love. Your words have a lovely lyrical feel which increases the harmony and "two peas in a pod" emotions that are joyfully "dancing" about.:-) Your glorious poem gives hope of what "commitment" truly feels like, for those of us still wondering if it really exists. It is truly my pleasure to read such eloquent writing. blessings to all, lynn I will now read your friend's poem. Richard Lamoureux August 20, 2016 at 6:41 PM Thanks for reading one of my older ones. Hugs Rick.

BE Bailey October 23, 2014 at 8:53 AM Beautiful Richard!!!! "B"

Bernard Colasurdo December 11, 2013 at 11:26 PM Hello Rick My friend, I am honored and blessed by your beautiful heart. Your words dedicated to the love Maria and I shared has touched my heart deeply. I can visualize your amazing poetry so vividly, I feel like im watching a fairytale. Thank You! Thank You! look for soup mail tomorrow Richard Lamoureux December 12, 2013 at 7:18 AM I'm so glad you have been blessed by these words. Your poem and story has touched me deeply and these words are my hearts response. I look forward to your soup mail.

Just That Archaic Poet December 11, 2013 at 8:02 AM Great choice of words which you executed and expertly crafted. This was a pleasure to read :) Richard Lamoureux December 11, 2013 at 8:08 AM Thanks so glad you enjoyed it.

Donna Jones December 5, 2013 at 10:49 PM Almost like an old song..just beautiful Rick.. Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2013 at 8:23 AM Good morning and thanks Donna, hugs Rick.

Poet Tacito December 5, 2013 at 9:49 AM Tremendous clarity in these lines. The adoration & warmth embedded in this poem are without limits. Very touching lines. Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2013 at 10:05 AM Thanks Drake! I hope you are enjoying a splendid Califoria day.

Eileen Manassian December 5, 2013 at 7:52 AM Celestial.......Ethereal.....Lovely. Loved ones never really leave us. Their memories always light the way for us. Beautiful beautiful poem from you, Richard. Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2013 at 8:06 AM Good morning Eileen, Bernard's is a beautiful love story that will one day end and begin with a reunion dance just beyond heavens gate.