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Army of One

The battlefield is eerily quiet waiting for the impeding war for the roar of battle for the blood that will be poured for the tears to be shed will power on will power determination against determination opposing sides begin their descent one side clinging to hope of getting back what was lost what once was what could’ve been the strength and inspiration the desire and passion the faith and trust the unconditional love a light that shone in darkness now extinguished this hope wages war fighting with a smaller army desperately wanting to win to claim victory in His name and rescue what little is left what has been held captive and to shine once again staged and ready on the battlefield across the way is an army of one but with many defenses backing it this driving force is resilient damned and unwavering to stand tall and stand firm this journey has been staggering when support was needed the most there were no soldiers in sight with so many trials and tribulations there was no season of rest no calming of the storms yes you must test your armor see what it can endure see what battles it can undergo but after surviving many combats even the strongest wears down even the strongest gets weary and your armor starts to give away how much more can it tolerate until it is pierced and blood shed why can’t the Blacksmith repair it? will He not help make it stronger? does He not see the danger ahead? where was He when aid was needed the most? just stand there and watch wait for the fall of this army the battlefield waiting one breath in the cold air one dull sword and brittle shield an army of one fueled by bitterness and anger betrayal and abandonment hardened and thick skinned full of determination to win to survive another battle this army of one ready for whatever comes prepared to go down fighting this army of one left out alone on a battlefield of life a soldier made by the uncaring molded by the unloving this army of one shall march ahead and fight as both sides begin their descent a battle cry sings out and the war has begun

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Date: 6/25/2011 1:58:00 AM
Yes.. I can definitely relate to that and I see the kind of resemblance with my "Hazy Days". Keep on fighting.
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Date: 6/17/2011 8:29:00 PM
i get this piece...unfortunately:) I read it before, but went back again for more.---I was unaware of winning that contest (brian?) I know I sign up, but don't see where we won? The results are unavailable from my view????anyway, Congrats! Which poem did you win with?
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:32:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Riley. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:33:00 AM
Super congrats on this very stirring and gripping write -- wonderful way to depict this inner battle!
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Thanks! When I wrote this, I was experiencing one of the most difficult battles ever...and the words just spilled out onto the paper....thanks again!
Date: 6/2/2011 12:33:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:55:00 PM
R.R.R.!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Righting Riley - Shauna Riley Avatar
Thanks so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!! It was a great contest :) I actually hadn't won any contests with this poem but have entered contests...thanks again!!
Date: 6/1/2011 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., RR
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:12:00 PM
congrats again on an excellent winning poem Constance... beautiful write as always ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:59:00 AM
Excellent. Such talent for the mentality of a soldier and atmosphere of the battlefield., and very well worded.
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A Rambling Righting Riley - Shauna Riley
Date: 5/31/2011 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much! I wrote this about me...the battle that wages war within me...hence the title, "Army of One"...I tend to write like that...with an underlying meaning...thanks again!
Date: 1/25/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week ARRR. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful choice to share with us all my friend..with luv..
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:35:00 AM
the army of one is stronger than the army of ton.. I truly enjoyed this poem,, and thanks I'm glad you enjoyed my divorce club.. Got lots of funny entries for that contest. And by the way,, i smiled at the thought '' the plaque on the wall " have yourself a nice day,..Linda,,
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Thanks for the win Linda!!
Date: 12/25/2010 12:20:00 AM
a powerful portrayal of such struggling probably means these are "real" experiences....I hope not, but if so, you deserve sympathy and a better life....regards
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