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Armageddon

Today I got a dream The world was ending Global warming stroked up Everyone rushing for the rescue Stampede produced all over the cities Roads were blocked And everyone's head was cocked Billionaires got their way to the rockets The rest fighting in vain to survive My mind blazed in confusion As I couldn't find a motive for their struggle Oblivious as it was Survival and peace was their cause But why not hug your loved ones Rather than bleeding all along Why not share the limited time with each other Rather than wasting time waiting for a miracle Which wasn't going to occur

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Date: 2/3/2023 11:40:00 AM
A creative write. I have seen many miracles. When your "Armageddon" comes things will be like hell. Have a great/blessed  day...............
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/3/2023 8:54:00 PM
Glad you liked it! Thank you for stopping by. You too have a great day.. :)
Date: 12/21/2022 3:02:00 PM
there really are no miracles, you're sure, just the raw, inhospitable feeling of abandonment. I placed myself among those affected by the armageddon of your poetry, it would be chaotic, terminal. very good, like all your texts.
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 12/22/2022 3:30:00 AM
Yes my dear friend! Thank you for stopping by! :)
Date: 12/9/2022 1:32:00 PM
The miracle happens within the body my friend, love ya
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Komal Walimbe
Date: 12/10/2022 10:36:00 PM
True...Thank you so much for commenting on my poem! Glad for your visit :)

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